Hello #ReVISIONweek revisers! Happy HUMP day! I hope you’ve had two wonderfully productive days of revision, and are excited for day 3!

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Today’s post is perfect for a mid-week check-in. Joana Pastro is here to make sure you’ve tackled your revisions in a way that has stayed true to your vision. Joana’s delightful debut picture book, LILLYBELLE, A DAMSEL NEVER IN DISTRESS, illustrated by Jhon Ortiz, will be published by Kane Press in Fall/2020.

Throw down your hatchets for just a moment and read on…

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By Joana Pastro

You’ve been working on a story. You’ve revised it a few times. Now you’ve reached that point where you have no idea what to do next, but you know there’s room for improvement. You need FRESH EYES.

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Having trusted peers to guide you along the revision path is essential. So if you don’t have a critique group yet, get one! 

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Then send your beloved manuscript to your new critique partners. 

Once you receive feedback, savor the praise. It might be that they love the premise, the voice was spot on, that they couldn’t stop laughing, or maybe that you pulled on their heartstrings. Hooray! 

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But—and there’s ALWAYS a but—if your new critique partners are doing their jobs, then they’ll also tell you how to improve your manuscript. Maybe they think the stakes aren’t high enough, or maybe there’s not enough heart, or maybe you have two problems. In the end, though, it will always be up to you to put their advice through your personal colander to decide what fits with your vision for the story.

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Feedback can point out issues with:

  • Line edits: grammar, punctuation, word choice.
  • Showing versus telling
  • Voice
  • Heart
  • Structure
  • Point of View (POV)
  • Premise
  • Potential/Marketability
  • Controversial issues
  • And more!


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So, how do you start revising? You will probably find that some suggestions resonated with you immediately. I find that to be especially true about line edits. You might be able to incorporate those right away.

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But what about the rest? The suggestions or questions that:

a) resonate with you, but require some pondering.
b) you’re not sure what to do with, but might be worth giving a try.
c) make you want to “kill the messenger” err critiquer. (Don’t.)

Here’s what I do:

I print my manuscript, and write all the comments down using a different color per critiquer. This way I can refer back to the comments at any time without having to go through all the hard copies or files again. My copy will look something like this:
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Now, take a step back.


Resist the urge to jump right back into revisions. 

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Let those questions and suggestions simmer, and allow your ideas to bloom. You’ll be surprised at how much work your brain does without you even realizing it. 

Take a walk, a shower, a nap, work on something else.

Eat some chocolate! 

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Let your manuscript sit.

After a few days, come back and read again. Remember this: revisions are fueled by questions. Be ready to ask and answer lots of them.

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At this point, you should be able to start revising with a much better grasp of what to keep from the feedback, and how to proceed. 

  • You might want to give some of the suggestions a try. For instance, write it in a different point of view, structure, or even switch your main character.
  • You should be able to assess how much your story will change if you add that little detail, or change that scene. How much of my story will need to be reworked? Is it worth it?
  • Ask questions. Would my character do this? Does this make sense? Is he behaving and/or sounding like say a four-year-old? 
  • Do I have more than one story problem and/or more than one goal? Sometimes a critique partner will pick one for you and make suggestions based on that. Is this the story I want to tell? What do you want the reader to take away?
  • Does this align with my vision? Is this the story I want to tell? (Yes, you should be asking this question over and over again.) 
  • Sometimes someone suggests something that seems like total nonsense. BUT WAIT A SECOND… that idea that doesn’t work at all, or it might open a different, more interesting path for your story. Don’t discard the nonsense!

Now that you’ve asked and answered all of those burning questions, dive in! 

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Enjoy the ride, and happy revision!

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Originally from Brazil, Joana now lives in Florida with her amazing husband, her three extremely creative children and a rambunctious Morkie. For as long as Joana can remember, she wanted to be an artist of some kind. So, she became an architect. But once her first child was born, all the visits to the library, and the countless story times made Joana start dreaming of becoming a children’s book author. She had no idea how to start, so for seven years all she did was collect story ideas on a little notebook. Finally, one Sunday afternoon she decided to sit down and write…

Joana is a member of SCBWI and is represented by Natascha Morris with Bookends Literary. Her debut picture book, LILLYBELLE, A DAMSEL NEVER IN DISTRESS, illustrated by Jhon Ortiz, will be published by Kane Press in Fall/2020. Much like LillyBelle, Joana Pastro loves a good tea party . . . or any party, really! When not writing, you can find Joana baking (and eating) delicious desserts, singing as loud as she can, or twirling around the house. Visit her at www.joanapastro.com, and on twitter @jopastro. 





  1. Great suggestions Joana! My critique group is paramount to my writing process. I always consider everything they suggest & let their comments sit for awhile before diving back in to revisions. Sometimes the things I first may have had a gut reaction to resist end up thinking just might work.

    • I’m glad the post resonated with you, Heather. Sometimes the comment that we totally disagree with, is the one that will make us see an out of the box solution for whatever issue we’re facing. Happy revising!

  2. Thanks for great advice, and list of burning questions to consider. I love the suggestion to compile critiques into one document, and different colors will make revision more enjoyable. And letting feedback sit for a while actually makes the process easier than trying to jump into revisions.

  3. I love the idea of different colors for each CP. I do that already for different edits (line, arcs, etc) but never thought of that for CPs! I love your questions, too. Thanks for the advice!

  4. Great tips again! I never thought about printing and using different colored pens to help differentiate between my critique partners. I’m going to try that! That’s always the hardest part. Toggling between everyone’s thoughts. Thanks!

  5. Yes yes yes!! Love it all!

    If you want to save some time on writing everyone’s suggestions down, Google docs allows eveyone to comment on the same doc. I use it for all my critique groups. If you want to try it out, pm me and I’ll definitely get you set up! @kaitlynleann17

    Thanks for the awesome reminders and tips; you are definitely a pro!!

    • Thanks, Kaitlin! I’m writing down your handle, and might take you up on that offer. I use Google docs, but I know I don’t take advantage of all it has to offer. On the other hand, I actually like handwriting it, because I think it engages the brain in a different way helping me remember those notes afterwards.

  6. Thank you for the suggestion to use different colors. I have no idea why I never thought of it and yet, it makes complete sense

    • Hi, Riya! Right? It took me a while to get there and when I did I was pretty proud of myself. LOL. Anyway, I hope revisions are going well for you. Good luck!

  7. LOVE LOVE LOVE the idea of printing feedback in different colors…I already put editor feedback (in a different color and in italics) at the top of a manuscript that is a revise and resubmit…so that I can refer back to it as I work on the story. But now I will add the feedback of critique buddies.
    And yes…critique partners are like gold…not only for the writing help, but perhaps more importantly, for the encouragement and validation that is so necessary in this business that is fraught with rejection and self-doubt. Awesome post, Joana! Thank you!

  8. Critique groups are so crucial to the growth of a manuscript (and a writer!). I’ve found that having CPs put their comments into a google doc allows me to see all their comments on my manuscript at once which is extra helpful for a brain – like mine – that needs all the organization help it can get!

  9. Love the color per critiquer all on the same page/manuscript. What a great idea. So much easier to see! Hope to use this soon. Thanks for sharing!!!

  10. Thanks for this. I do struggle with when to listen to feedback or not. Sometimes, I think, you can tell if someone just doesn’t get what you are trying to do. And I think that’s true for publishers too. So the choice is — change it for them (which may be easily doable) or move on.

    • You’re welcome, Steph! Sometimes they really don’t get it, but even in those instances, those comments might be beneficial, even if it is for us to understand our story better. I hope that makes sense.
      Happy revising!

    • You’re very welcome, Jyoti! Lol Don’t avoid any of them, even the ones that make your eyes roll. We can’t help it, can we? LOL. Seriously. All the comments we get help in some way, even if it’s to help us understand what’s the story we need to tell. Happy revising!

  11. Hi all,
    I’m away due to a family emergency, but I want to say I appreciate all your comments and I’ll respond to all of them.
    Stay tuned! ❤️

  12. Color coding– brilliant. Thank you, and also for the reminder to let things sit. Patience is important. Allowing the time to mull things over is time well spent.

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  14. As an over-reviser, I rely heavily on feedback from my CP, but I really love your comment of being able to assess how much it’ll change the story and if it’s really the story I really want to tell. Thank you so much Joana, I feel like I had an “aha” moment.

    • Yes! Holding onto the story we want to tell, and weighing the advice of CPs is tricky and yet our most trusted CPs are often so good at helping us truly identify the story we want to tell. (That was a terribly constructed sentence, but hopefully it made sense).

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